Nowadays, many people go on holidays to camping. This kind of tourism has turned very popular. However, the hotel
holidays continue being more crowded than the camping.
On the one hand, go camping is very useful if
you want to get away from it all. Moreover, this accommodation is cheaper than
hotels. In addition, if you want to have a good time and you have felt like
adventures, this is your place.
On the contrary, when you go camping you need
to sleep in a sleeping bag and this is uncomfortable. What’s more, if you can’t
see insects because you have panic to them, you shouldn’t go to the countryside.
In conclusion, if you want be relaxed and breathe
clean air, you should go to camp. Respect to me, I love live adventures
and have fun with friends. Surely, I wouldn't go to a hotel.
go on holidays to camping -- go camping on holidays (word order)
ResponderEliminarcrowded -- widely accepted?
you have felt like --- you feel like
want be relaxed --- want to be relaxed
Respect to me, I love live adventures and have fun --- For my part, ... having fun
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