sábado, 17 de mayo de 2014

“Advantages and disadvantages of fast food”.

All in all, when people listen fast food they associate this to wrong and unhealthy food like McDonalds or Burger King, although not always so. Incredibly, there are fast food that is good for our body. 

On the one hand, fast food is very cheap and quick to make, for this reason people prefers eat in a fast food restaurant than in other kind of places. Furthermore, not only, you can order food from your home but also, you can order it by Internet. Nowadays, restaurants owners are looking the form to turn the bad fast food into healthy fast food, it would be a good deal!

Moreover, if you eat lot of fast food every weeks, you will have overweight and another health problems, because this type of food has a lot of calories and fat.  In addition, much of restaurants shouldn’t cook with foods that aren’t fresh because this problem cause illness. What’s more, the way that they get meat or fish is bad for the planet.

To sum up, in small amount the fast food isn’t bad for people but you mustn’t eat much if you don’t want to end up sick. In my opinion, young people would prefer to eat fast food rather than eat vegetables or fruit, why? I don’t know, I suppose that is for contradict to our mothers when they say us that we would have to eat healthy.

1 comentario:

  1. Your essay is really long, more than 200 words.
    listen / hear
    associate this to --- associate this with
    there are fast food --- there is fast food
    people prefers
    a good deal
    every weeks
    have overweight --- get overweight
    another health problems --- other health problems
    has a lot of calories --- contain
    much of restaurants - quantifiers
    they get meat or fish -- very general
    To sum up, in small amount the fast food isn’t bad for people but you mustn’t eat much if you don’t want to end up sick. --- PUNCTUATION
    for contradict to our --- in order to contradict our
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